I found it easy to replace the boring words such as the, as, then, went, into very descriptive and rich words, I also found correcting my punctuation pretty easy as well because I already knew where to put them during editing time.
I found it hard to remember what we did on that day because I had kind of forgotten what we did, so I asked my friends and luckily they knew everything of what happened on that day, especially the hand games.
Next time I will try and add even more powerful words that I found because the words that I found, I still think they are pretty boring to add into my writing, well some of them are but not all of them.
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