Tuesday, November 24, 2020

Cheeky squirrel on the loose!

We were learning about retelling a story about this hawk trying to hunt this squirrel, luckily the squirrel won.

 I found it easy to decide what animal I could be because it was optional for us to choose what animal is best for us 

 I found it hard to change boring words into rich words because there was heaps you could put in but I didn't know what one to do because you can find a word better than the other 

 Next time I can improve is to make sure I dont write "had" instead of have.

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