We were learning about... Writing about our favourite time of the day
I found it challenging to... Putting this into a slide and copy and paste the work from my doc into the slide
I found it easy to... Find an image of midday
Next time I will... Write more about my favourite time of the day
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hello Rautaki, Its Curtis.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem! love the descriptive language and all the good language features! This reminds me of when I used to always lie on the grass at lunch as well! next time you could add more feelings to your poem.
Keep it up!
Curtis
thanks Curtis!
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