Thursday, November 21, 2019

Castle In The Distance

Castle In The Distance
Bridge.
There was this old bridge, It was so beautiful, it had
moss all over it, it was really stable, and there was a lot of
colorful bricks. What an amazing bridge I thought to myself.
While I was walking over it was very stable and flat.


Castle.
While I was walking over this old bridge I saw this
very tall creaky castle, It had a sign that had missing
letters, I think it meant to say NO TRESPASSING. It was
mysterious and mystique. When I walked close up to it. It felt
abandoned, “I wonder if there was an after life that’s still there.”
I said to myself. The door was opened and millions of rats
just came scooting past me. “I hate rats!” I said loudly.
Having rats scooting past me felt like I was surrounded by
rotten eggs. They smelt horrible. And I was thinking what could
be there. I had no doubt but the castle looked haunted.


Ocean.
I came out of the castle and saw this beautiful ocean.
I couldn't believe what I was seeing. I felt like I was in heaven.
The view looked unbelievable.  The ocean looked majestic,
transparent and calm but looked very cold. It was a green and
blue ocean. I could see all the beautiful sea creatures.
"How cool is that?" I said to myself.
Distance
There was this unknown
land that looked like it wasn’t claimed yet
. The trees looked well grown on that land.
I saw a few animals jumping around like kangaroos.
I really wanted to play with them but I didn't want to swim in
the cold water.

By Rautaki

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora, Rautaki I like the way you used descriptive words about the subjects. next time you might want to add a description on the top or bottom of your piece of writing.Good work Rautaki It's brilliant from Rhodes.

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  2. Thanks Rhodes for the amazing comment!

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